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Friday 29 March 2019

Pig the pug went to court

Pig and trevor are in court 

 At 8:30am pig the pug had a great fall out from the window of his apartment, broke some bones and howled all the dogs crowned him. We went to pig the pug and had an interview we asked him “what happened” he replide “that ugly dog name trevor went crazy don’t know why? But he pushed me off and made me almost make my face brake”. Then we got pushed out of the why by the ambilance they lifted him into the van we sprinted as fast as we can but they shut the curtain and that was last we saw him or was it. We are now at court intervewing trevor the ugly sauage dog we said “what happend before he fell out from the window?” he replide “ well he wouldn’t share my toys because I was to be adopted first so they were mine until pig came and ruien my life, all I wanted was to play with one toy, but he ran to put the toys in a mountain shape and sat on it the mountain of toys wobled and fell out the window”. Then the fight started pig was first so he had the crowd in his hands, so he howled “trevor tricked me on talking about when I was little then he creeped under my pile of toys and lifted the toys and through me out from the window”. The judge slammed the hammer trevor walked up and said “firstly it wasn’t your toys they were mine and you were the dumb one

1 comment:

  1. Hi Micah this is Ellie from St Bernadettes. I liked how you used describing words in the story. I liked the sentence about how you described the mountain of toys. Maybe next time you could check your puncuation and spelling. Look forward to see your next blog.

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