The mischievous conqueror that went missing

The legend about the mischievous conqueror

In the middle of the magic forest lived a successful conqueror. He rules half of the land that the villages live on, then suddenly he vanish in mid air, all that was left of him was dust light brown dust on his gigantic throne and his staff on the floor. No one could remember him or his name, but one person his trustworthy handsome minion joe. (not handsome) he seeked for him for years and years he had a beard, before he left the castle he remembered that the year was 2000. Then he came back he asked a person from the village what was the year and he said “2019”, joe's eyes pop and yield “2019!”he ran back to the where the castle castle was located and didn’t see him or the castle he was frightened. Then he heard his name being shouted “JOE, JOE, JOE!!!!” he turned around and saw a man in a villany suit he ran to the man and it was his master the ice king ruler of most towns and cities he was shredding tears down his face he ran to him opened his arms but once he touched him he woke up. It was all a dream,

 And that is the legend about the conqueror vanishing.

 In class we had to use this learning game thing it was called story started what we had to do was use that story starter and what ever came up was had to write about that. What I got was a very successful conqueror that suddenly went missing, so then I wrote about my topic and I think it came out pretty well. In the story starter there were cateorgories and we had to choose out of them, they were fantasy, sci-fi and then scramble. What I chose was fantasy it was about castles and knights.

 What I enjoyed about writing about the conqueror was that it didn't have to be true it had to fake and that was what I found fun because I am good at making up stories and it was easy. What I would change in my writing is the ending and to put more descriping words because whaen you look at it, it looks boring but if I put more descriping words then my writing would be fun and be making the reader hooked. What I found interesting was how much I can write when it has to be fake and when it has to be real because when I do a story the is real there will be lest words to read but when it is fake then there will be a lot of words to read.