Persuasive writing

WALT: persuade people on a topic of your choice e.g you want to persuade mum to give you a pay raise.

 Why we should play rugby at school

 Share - We could share our moves with the kids and maybe your own.

- So if kids are bored they could play rugby on the field.

- So we can teach them how to play rugby properly.

 Learn - We can teach them where to tackle and how to tackle.

 -We can show them how to defend their try line or how to defend with a line.

 Stress relief - So they can let their anger out on a tackle bag.

-They could be angry but when they get on the field and play for the whole game it will tirer them out and they will be happy but exhausted.

-They could be afraid of rugby but trust me once they play the game more often they will get confident and they will want to play rugby games forever.

 Why we shouldn’t play rugby at school I am here to explain why we don’t need to play league/rugby to show that our school is strong.

 Reason 1 - Because people will get hurt or break something in their body, there was a man who played rugby and he was paralysed from being in a scrum.

 - In schools the principal banned tackling for the kids safety because he doesn't want the kids injuring themselves.

 - I say that rugby is more dangerous than soccer because of all of the contact that is made in the tackles.

 Reason 2 - We can explain to them why we should ban rugby at school.

 - Also we can tell them stories about people who have been injured so they will know why we should not play rugby at school.

 - We could show them videos and pictures so they can know why we don’t play rugby.

 Reason 3 - so if the kids are feeling really scared of rugby then we could help them get out of the sport and play something else than rugby/league.

 - We could release all the pressure of them because they are not playing the sport.

 - We could explain to them why the sport is too dangerous for them and they will walk out of the sport and play something else because there are many sports that you could play.

 I hope this will help you get out of rugby/league and play a different sport like soccer, hokey, baseball, netball, basketball and more. I hope you can make a choice than rugby/league, maybe in the future you could be a star in any sport.

 In my writing my topic was why we should play rugby at school and we had to give three reasons in 1 paragragh and I had three paragraghs. It was hard to give good reasons to persuade the reader. Then after I finished my first topic I flipped it and wrote why we shouldn't play rugby at school. That was getting easier but harder at the same time, so I did my research and I found interesting facts and I wrote those ideas in my writing. It was hard but at least I fnshed the work and never gave up.