WALT: write a letter and show it to the world.
what I had to do was listen to my teacher and think and that was what I did and I wrote this great pecie of writing.
To whom may concern,
It has come to this moment when I have to talk to you about why do we need nurses.
We need nurses because if there is really sick patient that needs health care but they didn’t know that the nurses went on strike the patient will probably die or suffer and spread that sickness around the hole hospital or even the world!
So if I was a doctor/nurse and I had to work night shift and it was payday and I got a little amount of cash I could either fuss about it and go on strike and let the sick people die or I could think on the positive side and just forget about. (atleast you have money)
I love doctors/nurse because some are genouros and some can be rude but it dosen’t matter because everyone is diffrent because God created diffrent sizes of people because everyone is special just the way they are.
I wish people can just get along and enjoy time with eachother and also (DON’T WASTE IT).
You’s sincerly: Micah
Thursday, 5 July 2018
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wow micha I love how you are speaking up but what will happen if all the people in the world die?
ReplyDeleteTalofa Micah,
ReplyDeleteThis is Tama from room 6.I like what you have said about doctors/nurse it's ready good to know that you have been learning it's really good to know. did you write this by your self and did you write this be not searching information let me know pls.
Hi Micah,
ReplyDeleteThis is Moni from room 6. I like how you have wrote about the nurses going on strike, what I loved about is how you have a positive side and a negative side. what I really like is how you have explained me about nurses going on strike and the patient suffering. Next time can you please check your writing before you publish it because there are some words in your writing that needs checking such as spelling and punctuation, Besides everything else great work.
Kind Regards Moni