The mysterios log
I was walking along the hallway and I saw this mysterios log in my house so then I decided to take it into my room but as soon as I said that I wanted it be a dog it looked like my dog I was aaaamazed by the power that this log can do. So then I siad turn into a robot and it did. So now I walk with a 8.9 foot robot it even makes me breakfast, linch and dinner then it teaches my lots of sports like league, rugby, soccer and hocky. But most of all it taught me respect, freindship and loalty and now I use it where ever I go. People call me the bully but now they call me hero and robot teacher. Now my robots name is mike. Now when I need to go to school I say Mike the bike and he turns into the bike then when I so Mike he turns into the robot and we became best freinds for the end of our lives.
Hello Micah, I like how you made your story very interesting by putting a lot of descriptive language and it made me hooked. Maybe next time you can work on putting capital letters in names. I look forward to seeing more from you.
ReplyDeleteHi Dion,
Deletethank you for the comment I just edited my work and it looks great again
from Micah
Talofa Micah,
ReplyDeleteThe story was interesting and amazing. It was also a cool story like how the log turns into a robot! My Favorite part was when it said "people use to call me a bully, but now they call me a hero and robot teacher"
Maybe you could fix your spelling!
Great effort!