The scary house
Me and my family driving down the road to our fresh knew house but the outside of the house looked like it was unstable because of how it looked there are scratches on the wood the wood looked like a cat clibmed onto it and was holding on like it was getting blown away. As we were driving down the road I whisperd to my brother “I want to go back to our house not this one because this looks like it is haunted”. My brother thought that I was so dramtic so he ignored me. As we parked the car I wanted to stay inside but my dad told me to come and say hello. So me and my siblings went to say hello and then we just sat on the seat outside. Then after alot of talk we finally got the house and we were saying that is my room and this is mine and then my parents said “NO”. I felt like a rain cloud making tear drops. So our parents were walking around the house and well we were walking mum told us what one is our room. I was still scared because of the wood and plants the scaries plant is the rose. Then we moved the funituer that took us 2 days just to do that and then we relax, it took time for me to get use to the house and be happy but if I am with my family I will be happy.
Hi Micah this is Ellie from St.Bernadettes. I like your story because it is about the haunted house. I like some of your explaining of the house may next time you could check your spelling and punctuation. I look forward to your next story.
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