WALT: compose a poem about the waterslide
The waterslide
After when the activities were finished I was walking to the water slide with excitement. Then I walked up to the top and was waiting in line. When Petelo went down the water slide I could see everything and I was panicking until Neima’s dad said GO! I went down the waterslide like a penguin flying through stickers went up my back. That is why I have lumps and I live for another day.
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