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Friday, 20 October 2017

Recount

WALT: Recount a time from my holiday

The rest home
Yesterday me and my family went to the rest home. But when we got in the rest home me and my brothers were so excited to see grandma. But then when we stayed there I had to leave with my dad to go pick up my uncle and nana from the airport. But when we came back my brothers went crazy and my dad said to them “be quite!”. But they didn’t listen. So then they got told to get into the car. Then my brother Ramsay came inside and he said to me “come to the car”. So then I did. But then we went to play tag but then our dad told us off in front of everyone. But I wasn’t me who got embarrass it was my dad and he got so embarrassed that he went into the car really fast and drove to mcfarlen park for my training the drive was so boring that I went a sleep. But then 1 min later we were there and I was so tired. But then my dad said to me “we will go home after training”. So then I trained and after that I was not tired. But we had to go home. But before we went home we had to say goodbye to grandma. But when we got back to the rest home my brother Ramsay went running and there were people and me and my dad got so embarrassed that we walked really fast to grandma. But when we got there my dad told off my brothers. So then we said bye to grandma and went home. But I stayed in the room and when my nana and uncle said “hi” my nana went to hug her. But when she was hugging her they cried. But I was just going to cry but my cousins were there so I tried not to cry. But then when I got to the room my eyes were watery. So then my cousins saw them and they were almost going to laugh. And that was so embarrassing. So then we went home and went to sleep.


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2 comments:

  1. Hi Micah,Good story there I really liked the describing words that you used in your story.I really liked that and the reminds me of when I went to rest home and I got embarrassed.There were some thing you got wrong that you made but other then that that was a good story.Keep up the good work.

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    1. Hi Lui
      Thanks for the comment. Also sometimes I don't even know that I made an mistake. But thank you for commenting. Also Thanks for pointing that out.

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